Alright in decency.
It was over-played, for a romance game. I know it's for someone special, and I do like the message in the end, but I feel like it just was drawn out. I liked the style on the whole "everyone moved through me" and no one payed attention to you. The music was a very nice choice, and it was smooth and relaxing. I wish that you didn't have to make it such a depressing piece, but I really did like the end when the color was restored to the person and you reached color.
One thing to improve on is the backgrounds. The character moved terribly slow, but I'm guessing it compliments the attitude of the environment.
But I can't really make too much of a review here, it's not for me. It's just a special gift for someone you care about, and that's fine for me. Hope she enjoys it.