evibini's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Rapture!!!]

OH SH*T

I'M STILL ALIVE. OH MY GAWD.

Damn you Harold Camping.

<3 REM

:D

Mra responds:

We all live to die another day. in the end we as humanity can hold hands and smile and laugh and move on from this whole ordeal. thankfully I can rest well tonight...

[Facebook'd]

Aight

Although this flash was shitty as hell, I loved it. The fact you were so chill with everything. The weed in Pakistan, Osama havin a facebook, be Horatio Cain'd just made my day.

Thanks for the entertainment.
Really work on the artwork and the flow of everything. I like your style.

Just make it better animation, lol.

[Bob Pilgrim]

I liked it

Now, I'm not too fancy with Kenny-like muffled voice talking throughout a whole film, but then again, it's your series and you have your fans so I will not take that fully against you.

Michael Cera, we all know he's heavily type-casted, and Jesse Eisenberg looks awfully like him, and acts like him too. But it's funny how you brought forth all the Cera films together to make a comedic effect. I would also like to compliment you on your choice of music. Loved how Bass Battle was included near the end.

Good work. Scott Pilgrim is amazing.

[Animating Boxes at 3am]

What a fresh breath of air

I love The Decemberists. It's a fresh breath of air to see their creative works put into a creative display. I love your animation style. :)

Sorry this isn't that great of a review, but just to let you know I love it!

[Paul Voltaire!]

Wonderful

I loved the artwork. The humor was kind of dry, but alright for a short. I loved the "I guess Jim finally decided to do it" part. The animation was very smooth, and the pretzels were pretty pimp.

[this is fred.]

Well, um.

It was an interesting introduction to a series. I liked the smooth animation and the cool background to compliment the color of Fred, but there wasn't much into it. Perhaps give us a little more information of the character? I know it's just a trailer, but I would like to know more about the series before it begins. And yes, the music was very catchy.

[Piconormal Activity]

Fantastic.

I've never seen Paranormal Activity but that was pretty beautiful. I liked the background art and how it looked like an actual real time recording.

[Mico (Pico Parody)]

Not bad, though needs more improving.

From what I can tell, you probably are new to Flash. Flash is difficult to use, I know, but I can tell you have tons of room for improvement. Though before I go on, I would like to congratulate you for the length of the video compared to the file size of the SWF. The audio was pretty good, though I could here the BOOMs in them. And I do believe the program you used was Audacity, not Audiocity.

It looks like you animated this all on one layer. From the usual 'forgetting to fill in the teeth' and the constant erasing of certain areas of the eyes and other stoof well. There is too much "squiggle" on the brushstrokes. It would be better to use the straighten line tool on Flash 8 or just animate with lines. Though the lip sync was very good and the use of language was pretty nice as well. You could have drawn the characters a little better, especially the black guy who blammed the flash.

Nice effect on the Iron Man and the postman voice. Though don't over use it, and use more variety in voices. It sounded like this was voiced by two different people. It would be better to make it sound like a whole cast of individual people. This wasn't really a parody at all, but rather renaming Newgrounds and Pico.

Transitions were not great. The background wasn't really appealing and the words were poorly written. Try to add a cool background and add some actual Text. Nice use of music, actually. Pretty good considering (once again) the small file size.

In all, good job on the flash. Needs improvement. But keep practicing and you'll be a professional in no time.
:)

[Iceland is Niceland!]

I lol'd in my pants.

I wasn't sure how this movie would turn out. At first, I thought this was an overrated stick movie about science. NO! It's comedy, and it's scientific. NOW THAT'S A PLUS MY FRIEND. I like it, I like it.

TheEntertainer responds:

thanks for the review! It's reviews like these that make me glad that I'm an animator.

[the third world war: 2075]

Surprisingly.

I was expecting MUCH MUCH worse. Apparently you beat my expectations. Well animated, well climaxed and the music went so well.

The only criticism I have is the art. Too much gradients and too much of one kind of brush. It's well animated, I just recommend using different size of brushes and use brighter colors and less radial gradients.

Other than that, good work! :)